i like your title of your story because it fit the picture of a city and the logo of our city. i also like your news paper because it got the date , author , and your email adress. i also like your subtitle because it is cool !
i think you should make the word a little bit bigger so it is easier to look.i also think that you should make the title of your story awesome. and i also think that you should only put 1 picture so you can write more about the character.
i like your title of your story because it fit the picture of a city and the logo of our city. i also like your news paper because it got the date , author , and your email adress. i also like your subtitle because it is cool !
Trả lờiXóai think you should make the word a little bit bigger so it is easier to look.i also think that you should make the title of your story awesome. and i also think that you should only put 1 picture so you can write more about the character.
Trả lờiXóai also think you should write on your first story what you write about and at the bottom i also think you should write more about his personality.
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